--- 1/draft-ietf-ecrit-location-profile-registry-policy-00.txt	2020-11-18 10:13:14.958619905 -0800
+++ 2/draft-ietf-ecrit-location-profile-registry-policy-01.txt	2020-11-18 10:13:14.970620210 -0800
@@ -1,19 +1,19 @@
 
 ecrit                                                         R. Gellens
 Internet-Draft                                Core Technology Consulting
-Updates: 5222 (if approved)                             November 2, 2020
+Updates: 5222 (if approved)                            November 18, 2020
 Intended status: Standards Track
-Expires: May 6, 2021
+Expires: May 22, 2021
 
            Changing the LoST Location Profile Registry Policy
-          draft-ietf-ecrit-location-profile-registry-policy-00
+          draft-ietf-ecrit-location-profile-registry-policy-01
 
 Abstract
 
    This document changes the policy of the Location-to-Service
    Translation (LoST) Location Profile registry established by RFC5222
    from Standards Action to Specification Required.  This allows
    standards development organizations (SDOs) other than the IETF to add
    new values.
 
 Status of This Memo
@@ -24,21 +24,21 @@
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-   This Internet-Draft will expire on May 6, 2021.
+   This Internet-Draft will expire on May 22, 2021.
 
 Copyright Notice
 
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@@ -86,27 +86,27 @@
 
    No new security considerations are identified by this change in
    registry policy.
 
 4.  IANA Considerations
 
    IANA is requested to change the policy of the Location-to-Service
    Translation (LoST) Location Profile Registry (established by
    [RFC5222]) to Specification Required.  The expert reviewer is
    designated by the responsible area director.  The reviewer should
-   verify that any proposed new value:
+   verify that:
 
-   o  Is specified by the IETF, NENA, or a similar SDO in which location
-      profiles are in scope;
-   o  Has a clear need (which includes there not being an existing
-      profile that meets the need);
-   o  The profile specification is unambiguous and interoperable.
+   o  the proposed new value is specified by the IETF, NENA, or a
+      similar SDO in which location profiles are in scope;
+   o  the proposed new value has a clear need (which includes there not
+      being an existing profile that meets the need);
+   o  the profile specification is unambiguous and interoperable.
 
 5.  Acknowledgements
 
    Many thanks to Ted Hardie for his helpful review and suggestions, and
    to Guy Caron for his suggestion to clarify that "clear need" includes
    there not being an existing profile.
 
 6.  References
 
 6.1.  Normative References