--- 1/draft-ietf-opsawg-hmac-sha-2-usm-snmp-04.txt	2015-03-23 08:14:55.707428776 -0700
+++ 2/draft-ietf-opsawg-hmac-sha-2-usm-snmp-05.txt	2015-03-23 08:14:55.723429156 -0700
@@ -1,19 +1,19 @@
 
 OPSAWG                                                    J. Merkle, Ed.
 Internet-Draft                                 Secunet Security Networks
 Intended status: Standards Track                              M. Lochter
 Expires: September 24, 2015                                          BSI
                                                           March 23, 2015
 
           HMAC-SHA-2 Authentication Protocols in USM for SNMP
-                draft-ietf-opsawg-hmac-sha-2-usm-snmp-04
+                draft-ietf-opsawg-hmac-sha-2-usm-snmp-05
 
 Abstract
 
    This memo specifies new HMAC-SHA-2 authentication protocols for the
    User-based Security Model (USM) for SNMPv3 defined in RFC 3414.
 
 Status of This Memo
 
    This Internet-Draft is submitted in full conformance with the
    provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79.
@@ -278,41 +278,40 @@
 
    The MIB module specified in this memo does not define any managed
    objects, subtrees, notifications or tables, but only object
    identities (for authentication protocols) under a subtree of an
    existing MIB.
 
 7.  Relationship to Other MIB Modules
 
 7.1.  Relationship to SNMP-USER-BASED-SM-MIB
 
-   RFC 3414 [RFC3414] specifies the MIB for the User-based Security
-   Model (USM) for SNMPv3 (SNMP-USER-BASED-SM-MIB), which defines
-   authentication protocols for USM based on the hash functions MD5 and
-   SHA-1, respectively.  The following MIB module defines new HMAC-SHA2
-   authentication protocols for USM based on the SHA-2 hash functions
-   [SHA].  The use of the HMAC-SHA2 authentication protocols requires
-   the usage of the objects defined in the SNMP-USER-BASED-SM-MIB.
+   RFC 3414 [RFC3414] specifies the MIB module for the User-based
+   Security Model (USM) for SNMPv3 (SNMP-USER-BASED-SM-MIB), which
+   defines authentication protocols for USM based on the hash functions
+   MD5 and SHA-1, respectively.  The following MIB module defines new
+   HMAC-SHA2 authentication protocols for USM based on the SHA-2 hash
+   functions [SHA].  The use of the HMAC-SHA2 authentication protocols
+   requires the usage of the objects defined in the SNMP-USER-BASED-SM-
+   MIB.
 
 7.2.  Relationship to SNMP-FRAMEWORK-MIB
 
-   RFC 3411 [RFC3411] specifies the The SNMP Management Architecture MIB
-   (SNMP-FRAMEWORK-MIB), which defines a subtree snmpAuthProtocols for
-   SNMP authentication protocols.  The following MIB module defines new
-   authentication protocols in the snmpAuthProtocols subtree.
-   Therefore, the use of the HMAC-SHA2 authentication protocols requires
-   the usage of the objects defined in the SNMP-FRAMEWORK-MIB.
+   RFC 3411 [RFC3411] specifies the SNMP-FRAMEWORK-MIB, which defines a
+   subtree snmpAuthProtocols for SNMP authentication protocols.  The
+   following MIB module defines new authentication protocols in the
+   snmpAuthProtocols subtree.
 
 7.3.  MIB modules required for IMPORTS
 
-   The following MIB module IMPORTS objects from SNMPv2-SMI [RFC2578]
-   and SNMP-FRAMEWORK-MIB [RFC3411].
+   The following MIB module IMPORTS definitions from SNMPv2-SMI
+   [RFC2578] and SNMP-FRAMEWORK-MIB [RFC3411].
 
 8.  Definitions
 
  SNMP-USM-HMAC-SHA2-MIB DEFINITIONS ::= BEGIN
      IMPORTS
          MODULE-IDENTITY, OBJECT-IDENTITY,
      snmpModules             FROM SNMPv2-SMI          -- [RFC2578]
      snmpAuthProtocols       FROM SNMP-FRAMEWORK-MIB; -- [RFC3411]
 
  snmpUsmHmacSha2MIB MODULE-IDENTITY