--- 1/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ieee-802-11-08.txt	2017-09-18 22:13:07.547653746 -0700
+++ 2/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ieee-802-11-09.txt	2017-09-18 22:13:07.619655470 -0700
@@ -1,19 +1,19 @@
 
 Transport Working Group                                       T. Szigeti
 Internet-Draft                                                  J. Henry
 Intended status: Standards Track                           Cisco Systems
-Expires: March 19, 2018                                         F. Baker
-                                                      September 15, 2017
+Expires: March 22, 2018                                         F. Baker
+                                                      September 18, 2017
 
                     Diffserv to IEEE 802.11 Mapping
-                    draft-ietf-tsvwg-ieee-802-11-08
+                    draft-ietf-tsvwg-ieee-802-11-09
 
 Abstract
 
    As internet traffic is increasingly sourced-from and destined-to
    wireless endpoints, it is crucial that Quality of Service be aligned
    between wired and wireless networks; however, this is not always the
    case by default.  This document specifies a set of Differentiated
    Services Code Point (DSCP) to IEEE 802.11 User Priority (UP) mappings
    to reconcile the marking recommendations offered by the IETF and the
    IEEE so as to maintain consistent QoS treatment between wired and
@@ -27,21 +27,21 @@
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-   This Internet-Draft will expire on March 19, 2018.
+   This Internet-Draft will expire on March 22, 2018.
 
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@@ -1492,21 +1492,21 @@
    Finally, it should be noted that the recommendations put forward in
    this document are not intended to address all attack vectors
    leveraging QoS marking abuse.  Mechanisms that may further help
    mitigate security risks of both wired and wireless networks deploying
    QoS include strong device- and/or user-authentication, access-
    control, rate limiting, control-plane policing, encryption and other
    techniques; however, the implementation recommendations for such
    mechanisms are beyond the scope of this document to address in
    detail.  Suffice it to say that the security of the devices and
    networks implementing QoS, including QoS mapping between wired and
-   wireless networks, SHOULD be considered in actual deployments.
+   wireless networks, merits consideration in actual deployments.
 
 9.  Acknowledgements
 
    The authors wish to thank David Black, Gorry Fairhurst, Ruediger
    Geib, Vincent Roca, Brian Carpenter, David Blake, Cullen Jennings,
    David Benham and the TSVWG.
 
    The authors also acknowledge a great many inputs, notably from David
    Kloper, Mark Montanez, Glen Lavers, Michael Fingleton, Sarav
    Radhakrishnan, Karthik Dakshinamoorthy, Simone Arena, Ranga Marathe,